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..::GoodBye::.. SasoDei by *ShikasCupCake:iconShikasCupCake:





Deidara laid on the hospital bed next to sasori. Sasori was dieing. There was nothing he could do about it now.

“s-sasori” deidara said chocking up tears coming out of his eyes.

“shhh don’t cry love” sasori laughed then regretted it because he had to lean over the other side of the bed to cough up blood.

“please stop talking, un!” dei yelled hugging him. They had asked the doctors to leave them alone while sasori had his final moments.

“I don’t care” sasori said smiling. “I want to talk to you some more dei” sasori said his eyes getting tears in them.

“please….don’t talk like that, un” dei said  tears coming out of his blue eyes.

“s-stop crying dei.  Im happy I’ve gotten to live…with you..” sasori said smiling threw his tears. “but…but now I have to go.”  sasori said stroking deidara cheek.

Deidara’s tears kept coming down his face.

“please don’t leave me Dana…I cant live with out you, un!” dei cried laying his head down in  Sasoris chest.

“shhh love…don’t cry. Be strong. I love you” sasori said turning over to face him. Deidara turned towards him to.

“I love you to, un” dei said. Even tho sasori said to be strong he couldn’t help but cry.

Sasori picked a hand up and wiped away one of deidara tears.

“dei…its….its time” sasori said. Deidara cried and clinged on to his Danna.

“please don’t go! Sasori, un!” dei cried holding him closer.

“shhh….love….I…have…to go…..I love….you….deidara” sasori said then closed his eyes, a tear falling out of one. Deidara herded the machine keeping track of  Sasori’s heart beat make a long beeeeeeep.

Deidara stared at sasori. He held him closer.

“SASORI! NO! DAMNIT NO, UN!!” dei screamed holding him closer.

They knew this was going to happen for a month now. Yet no amount of time could have prepared them.

Deidara knew sasori would want him to have a happy life. But deidara couldn’t. his tears kept falling.

Even when itachi hidan and kisame came in to get him away form sasori so they could take him away, the tears kept falling.

In the week before Sasori’s funeral deidara locked himself inside his house.

He could almost hear sasori in his head now “dei…just because im not here doesn’t mean you have to be depressed! You a beautiful handsome man! Go out there and make you self happy again!”

deidara stared at the puppet saosir had carved for him. It had red hair like sasori.

He hugged it close to his chest and cried. The day before the funeral deidara decided to write a note to be put with Sasori’s body when he was cremated.


Sasori,
          Hi….how you doing up there? Im …ok down here. Oh hell I cant lie. Danna I cant stand living with out you! Its like my eyes wont stop shedding tears! I wonder if they’ll be able to burn this not because its drenched with my tears. I know you told me to be happy but….I cant Danna. I love you so much…damit why did you leave me! I cant sleep…these damn tears! Danna….im a mess with out you! You better be waiting for me. Because if I come and you’ve moved on im going to be pissed. Hehe….when I look at the side of the bed you slept on….I feel like you still there…the other night I could of swore I herded you voice say “I love you”…maybe im crazy? Yeah that’s it. Who else would be here writing on a note to a dead lover?  Damit…rember that little puppet you gave me sasori?  He looks so much like you its not even funny. Well I better say good bye before this note gets so wet they cant burn it with you.
                                             I love you sasori.
p.s Wait for me?

p.p.s you better.

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©2008-2010 *ShikasCupCake
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Author's Comments

Oh god i cried.

i had to write it tho.

dont kill me?

this was a random idea.

doesnt relate to ANYTHIG.

The Pictre at the top is ---> [link] By alluno

I was lsiitng to "good bye my lover" by James Blunt when i wrote it.

oh god its the perefct song for this.

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:iconkitmarin:
*crying* awwww that was so cute!!
the note did me in TT_TT

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:iconshikascupcake:
Thanks.

yeah did me in two *crying*

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LIEK, OMG TOTALY BBY.
:iconcrowmaster15:
*cries as much as Dei* OMG thats sooooooo sad!!!!!! But I luv it :crying:

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Thank you and i know TT~TT

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LIEK, OMG TOTALY BBY.
:iconsuemao:
oh, this is so sad!

you're a meanie your story actually made me cry! do you know how much it takes to make me cry?
either you're a really good writer or I'm getting really soft! (I think it's the former...at least I hope it is XP)

will there be a sequel?
:iconshikascupcake:
Thank you.

and i know what you mean! i was reading another persons thing and it takes ALOT to make me cry and i was cryign for theres T_T
srry 4 making u cry >w<

and mabey....depends if i get "inspired" pfft i soud werid sayign that xD

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LIEK, OMG TOTALY BBY.
:iconkariuchiha16:
OMG!!!so sad!T_T...i love it!poor deidei!

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Art is an eternal bang un!~sasori and deidara
pitiful soul lost in the darkness. ur hateful actions to others have tainted ur immortal soul.do u wann see waat death looks lik?~hell girl aka ai.
:iconshikascupcake:
Thank you and i know T_____T

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LIEK, OMG TOTALY BBY.
:iconkariuchiha16:
ur welcom!

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Art is an eternal bang un!~sasori and deidara
pitiful soul lost in the darkness. ur hateful actions to others have tainted ur immortal soul.do u wann see waat death looks lik?~hell girl aka ai.
:iconsuemao:
You're welcome!

naw, it's a good thing that I cried (...that sounds slightly odd...) I think it means that you're a very good writer! you shouldn't apologize for that~ o^.^o

no, you don't sound weird, I understand what you mean by "inspired". no good idea can come without inspiration!

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